[DESTROYER_0_2]

Здравствуйте, хочу представить вам мой авторский стишок. Сочинил я его специально для Д\з по Английскому языку. Конструктивная критика приветствуется.

FIGHT WITH THE LAZINESS
Every damn day Laziness said me,
What I'm doing again
Stupid and wrong things,
Over and over again.

I should to always lying down on sofa
And watching silly TV.
Hey, friends, who are you?
I don't need you at all.
I kept believed damn Laziness...

Till my Conscience told me:
«Hold the barbell and fight with Laziness.»
One hit, two hits,
But she doesn't back down, oh no!
What's happened with her, she sees red!
This is the end, I don't think so.

Take an orange pike, Conscience said.
I stabbed Laziness, shouting: «Get lost!»
She deflated
And only the last word she dared to shout out: «BACKSTABBER»