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Сообщение от LaRousse
1. «{artistName} high scores» или «High scores for {artistName}»
2. ««Guess the tune!» is a game based on a well-known TV programme. Choose any artist and if it has enough songs presented, you can play «Guess the tune!» game. The rules are very simple. You are given a random song to listen to and 7 variants of its name. The faster you guess the song, the more points you will get if the answer is right.»
3. «I got {points} points (of 5000) in «Guess the tune!» game (For songs of: {artist})»
4. «You gave {rightAnswers} right answers and got {points} points»
5. «Unfortunately, we consider your score unlikely and achieved in a dishonest manner. If we are wrong, please, contact the site administration and <a href="http://thenewworld.ru/en/crch.html">the centre of superhuman powers».
6. «Unfortunately, this artist has not enough songs presented.»
7. «Guess the song! The faster you guess, the more points you will get for this round.»
примерно так  но, может, кто-нибудь еще предложения внесет. |
There are other smaller problems, but I will just point to a couple:
1. "Choose any artist and if it has enough songs presented, - " this implies that you call the artist "it". Artist is not "it". It is either "he" or "she", or "the artist".
Now, obviously you tried to use it in reference to the "game" from the previous sentence. But with the "artist" being in between, this does not work.
You need to re-phrase.
2. "You are given a random song to listen to and 7 variants of its name" - the first thing I thought that the song indeed may have 7 different names. Which it does not. What the Russian sentence says is that you are given 7 answers, and only one of them is correct.
PS> The other problems are smaller.
PPS> I would have a problem with the whole concept of #5, that is "we think you are a dishonest person, but feel free to try to prove otherwise".
I also have the problem with both Russian verbiage and its Russian translation.
Extremely offensive, both of them.
Even if you want to let a pesron know, that his results are too good to be true, there are other ways to phrase this.