Military_Fox
09.04.2015, 17:13
Добрый день.
Не могу понять, почему первод, который я отослал - приняли, но не в ту группу. Я прислал перевод песни группы "Informatik - Come Together". А сейчас он располагается у группы "The Beatles".
Модератор, который проверил, написал, чтобы я не путал их. Мне стало интересно, неужели это кавер? Я зашёл к группе и проверил текст. В итоге оказалось, что это совершенно другая песня (текст на английском предоставлялся) и перевод никак не вяжется с оригиналом.
Прошу, пожалуйста, объяснить, как так? И прошу повторно рассмотреть мой перевод.
Предоставляю тексты для сравнения:
"The Beatles - Come Together"
Here come old flattop
He come grooving up slowly
He got joo-joo eyeball
He one holy roller
He got hair down to his knee
Got to be a joker he just do what he please
He wear no shoeshine
He got toe-jam football
He got monkey finger
He shoot coca-cola
He say "I know you, you know me"
One thing I can tell you is you got to be free
Come together right now over me
He bag production
He got walrus gumboot
He got Ono sideboard
He one spinal cracker
He got feet down below his knee
Hold you in his armchair you can feel his disease
Come together right now over me
He roller-coaster
He got early warning
He got muddy water
He one mojo filter
He say "One and one and one is three"
Got to be good-looking 'cause he's so hard to see*
Come together right now over me.
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah...
"Informatik - Come Together"
Slow down, young one
What's the big rush?
Soon you will learn
It's both our turn
Can you hear me?
Do you feel me?
Two hearts beating
Heavy breathing
Don't stop 'til you've had enough
The two of us, let's come together
Take control and get on top
Just flip a spot, let's come together
There are some things worth the waiting
A total force is in the making
Bated breath, anticipating
Self-control so quickly fading
Moving faster
Alabaster
Senses shatter
Nothing matters
Don't stop 'til you've had enough
The two of us, let's come together
Take control and get on top
Just flip a spot, let's come together
Give to me complete surrender
All we really need is pleasure
Make this moment last forever
We can leave this world together
Give to me complete surrender
All we really need is pleasure
Make this moment last forever
We can leave this world
Together
Let's come together
Let's come
Let's come together
Let's come
It's now or never
Let's come
Let's come, let's come, let's come together
Не могу понять, почему первод, который я отослал - приняли, но не в ту группу. Я прислал перевод песни группы "Informatik - Come Together". А сейчас он располагается у группы "The Beatles".
Модератор, который проверил, написал, чтобы я не путал их. Мне стало интересно, неужели это кавер? Я зашёл к группе и проверил текст. В итоге оказалось, что это совершенно другая песня (текст на английском предоставлялся) и перевод никак не вяжется с оригиналом.
Прошу, пожалуйста, объяснить, как так? И прошу повторно рассмотреть мой перевод.
Предоставляю тексты для сравнения:
"The Beatles - Come Together"
Here come old flattop
He come grooving up slowly
He got joo-joo eyeball
He one holy roller
He got hair down to his knee
Got to be a joker he just do what he please
He wear no shoeshine
He got toe-jam football
He got monkey finger
He shoot coca-cola
He say "I know you, you know me"
One thing I can tell you is you got to be free
Come together right now over me
He bag production
He got walrus gumboot
He got Ono sideboard
He one spinal cracker
He got feet down below his knee
Hold you in his armchair you can feel his disease
Come together right now over me
He roller-coaster
He got early warning
He got muddy water
He one mojo filter
He say "One and one and one is three"
Got to be good-looking 'cause he's so hard to see*
Come together right now over me.
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah,
Come together, yeah...
"Informatik - Come Together"
Slow down, young one
What's the big rush?
Soon you will learn
It's both our turn
Can you hear me?
Do you feel me?
Two hearts beating
Heavy breathing
Don't stop 'til you've had enough
The two of us, let's come together
Take control and get on top
Just flip a spot, let's come together
There are some things worth the waiting
A total force is in the making
Bated breath, anticipating
Self-control so quickly fading
Moving faster
Alabaster
Senses shatter
Nothing matters
Don't stop 'til you've had enough
The two of us, let's come together
Take control and get on top
Just flip a spot, let's come together
Give to me complete surrender
All we really need is pleasure
Make this moment last forever
We can leave this world together
Give to me complete surrender
All we really need is pleasure
Make this moment last forever
We can leave this world
Together
Let's come together
Let's come
Let's come together
Let's come
It's now or never
Let's come
Let's come, let's come, let's come together